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20 November 2013 @ 06:52 pm
From now on, the commentary was written after finishing the whole story. Also, it’s been forever since I actually wrote these chapters, so I’m hoping I can remember what I wanted to comment on.

Chapter 14 CommentaryCollapse )
30 October 2013 @ 08:11 pm
The reason this chapter is so short is that the entire first part is stupid. I swear, it probably took me a month to get this thing done, and I still don’t like it.

Chapter 13 CommentaryCollapse )    

19 October 2013 @ 09:28 pm
In which I figure out that writing attempts to communicate with non-verbal dragon is hard.

Chapter 12 CommentaryCollapse )
10 October 2013 @ 12:51 pm
Well, since I'm dog-sitting at the moment for my brother and his wife while my nephew is being born (whoo-hoo!), I thought I'd update the commentary.

This was the first chapter I typed up after realizing I had to change the background battle from Dieppe to the Battle of the Atlantic. So from now on, the commentary will not be looking backwards on that as it sometimes did in the previous chapters’ commentaries.


Chapter 11 CommentaryCollapse )

Hmm, another chapter that really came out of nowhere. But, in a sense, it was really necessary in order to prolong the story. One of the things I hated about the movie was how fast things came about, and this was meant to add a little padding.

Chapter 9 (Part 1 of 2)Collapse )
07 October 2013 @ 09:57 pm
I started with an interlude with the villain, because one of the problems I had with the movie was a lack of explanation for the green mist. I didn’t mind the green mist so much as it didn’t make any sense.

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